Setting details: Detention room with old tech, contrasting with the school's advanced tech. The hidden lab could have advanced tech, showing the school's dual nature.
The room’s hum turned oppressive. Onscreen, the coordinates updated: . Vertin’s scarred fingers flew across his keyboard, not to escape, but to leave a loop in the system—a digital footprint leading back to the Nexus. -ENG- Vertin in detention -RJ01250668-
He’d hacked the right system.
Need to ensure the story is engaging, with a good balance of action and character development. Check for consistency in the sci-fi elements and make sure the case number is tied into the plot somehow, maybe as a tracking code or part of the school's system. Setting details: Detention room with old tech, contrasting
Vertin’s mind raced. He’d bypassed the school’s mainframe to expose favoritism in grading—a publicity stunt. But Lira? She’d gone straight for a hidden server. “Why’d they let us access the system?” Onscreen, the coordinates updated: